【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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) `/ e. h3 l' \" |7 I3 H歌词我附在后面。
; K9 R: h. b: GThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
9 j! b% Q3 |0 ^3 g8 }When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 G: x" `) ^2 i# R. ?- F! Z7 IThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 g+ o1 J* M2 C' F' W$ n' MYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
* K$ n* B8 X3 r, d  ]I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
. p0 r- I( c6 C; ACan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
5 ]( n2 j+ i9 V2 _I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
! y6 l1 t- {) v- ]% wYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
# d4 e3 Z* ^6 z0 g: TYour speech can’t even keep up with it
) b# i0 z2 K/ s( D+ pIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 j  q, }; {7 aRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& g3 {/ s4 y, |/ D<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! ?* n) O( K; C& k1 T<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 K1 U4 G, p2 V. K* _- R<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* A/ g2 f0 H2 U+ X- R<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, {; C, H- C+ O* K6 [8 z4 N9 a<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ y. c; o  Y2 G8 M" g6 H<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 b3 V8 @9 R$ k7 T" T$ w" o<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 `9 I6 y: u1 a<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( Z+ [, w% N( p/ t9 `<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% n& t# m" E2 s# G. z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ H0 O9 n5 `; k1 ?. Q$ K( z3 q& [( e; a<P>你无需担心</P>
1 k. ]2 d3 W' ^: S<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 Z& {( r. W: Q- R& Q- ]<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  h1 o: W9 k1 i8 C. X<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% e5 B: {. i* @5 Q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ N3 x2 ^" C& a# A" s% |; S4 w<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 b2 h+ V' w9 J$ _( h<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& h5 c+ @" |% T' O6 S4 x  h<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 R2 D# W  g$ s5 e, _$ K- ]<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 T: N7 E& v# F7 [6 C<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; K- P; J; v: S; @, \' S( }) p0 X<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, `  e+ g- Z% w/ |1 t. X<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. D! @9 Q' u8 |- f4 F: a% g  ?<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% ~/ u: v5 |3 o( l9 f<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# o5 X9 P2 H/ |* c; Y& {<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
9 g4 O" B% {+ D+ f* j) h% j<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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  W: W3 d* n% R 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>